I think this looks fine. I assume the black box around the candle is a glitch you will take care of before it goes to press.I would make sure you use proper "curly" quotes and apostrophes, instead of the straight inch/foot marks.also as a suggestion I would change the Lisa Hendley quote to red to separate it from the main text.
Thanks Ted! Good feedback!
Get rid of the comma after "Now"
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